Sunday, July 19, 2009

She Wasn't that Great...

This one sort of just came to me. It's about...well just read. I hope you enjoy. As always feel free to leave your thoughts, comments, and feelings. I love the feedback and I'd like to hear from you...


She was kinda cute
Had dimples with a smile too
She might of had me fooled
But that was my fault too
Slender, quick, a lil thick, and fun to be with
Occasionally, I laughed at Her wit
Sometimes it was cute, the way she would throw fits
At times I thought She was the only one I should be with
I loved to make her laugh
If anything, number one in my draft
Intelligent, but at the same time daft
But arent't we all
In one increment or another
My size
The right fit
Golden Brown
Peach lips
I won't lie, I felt it through my finger tips
If that was all...
But that was it
As deep as I explored
There was nothing more
Just a generic fixture of a picture of my black sister, digitized from an HD mixture
And excuse me if I get too deep
But I'm deep
And deep oceans are more vivid than shallow streams
In my opinion...
Now ain't saying she was shallow
But... It is what it is
A mirage
To add to my repertoire of knowledge
It's part the reason I went to college
A part of my dreams
Now the rest, you wouldn't even believe
Trust, I'm not putting Her down
Somewhere every Queen deserves their crown
But not from me
And maybe She could be
A Queen
No ones perfect
I'm not
At one point, I damn near thought she was
But that wasn't to be
Yeah, she was okay
But... She wasn't that Great
Not to me...



4 comments:

  1. that was cool. i think we've all had one of those -lol.

    keep 'em coming!

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